Angel of Death

I think you have something here. If you work on it a little it'll get better. Where it says who, what are you going to choose? I think that needs ...

I'm back!!! Whoa this was so intense I really can't wait to read the rest. Well I'll get to to the next part as soon as possible. P.S. You say ...

This was hilarious. Charlie is too funny, but Edward is just so different...and so care-free...I mean how is Bella going to fall in love with this Edward especially when he ...

I really liked this part of chapter 1, I like all of them! You are an amazing writer...I wish I could read more today but I have to go work ...

Okay now you have me crying. Why did Aganost have to die? Okay before I cry a river I have to tell you I'm hooked. Now I really want to ...

Which do you prefer Mark or Aedomir? Well anyways Hi!! I haven't critiqued any of your work yet sorry, but I am not much of a critique artist. To get ...

I really love this. I mean its not everyday you get the chills while reading a poem. You made this guy seem so real with his emotions and first to ...

I loved this but as I read it I kinda got my own little beat and I think you should take out dirty where it says she falls to her ...

I really loved this. Its so original. I don't think I ever came across a dramatic poem like this on YWS. This was perfect in ever sense of the word. ...

This is not like Twilight in anyway. The only thing Lavender Rose and Twilight have in common is that they are both amazing stories. I really see now why Lukas ...

I think until I read more, this is my favorite chapter. Nicholas and Charlie have a love that doesn't need to be explained because it just is. I don't think ...

I really enjoyed Lavender Rose. I love this title by the way. Also I love the name Crescentia. Well I must say that after I finished this chapter I kind ...

Please don't tell me this is all. I loved this. True brilliance. Post more. Please. I beg of you. Nicholas is all I can think about. He is such a ...

I totally agree with Fall, you're my fav writer here. If you were to get this published I would buy this. Your words are like a soft beautiful fluorescent light ...

You're a fabulous writer and each minute I read I get so addicted. Elizabeth I think is going to be the antagonist but I like her. I think Nicholas would ...